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today razor blades are not enough
there's a pain I need to feel
touching your face right now
i know this world just isn't real
bring on needles, forks and glass
just prove that i'm not dead
this black heart that beats within
i need to make it red
i hug you and i kiss you
i lay here at your side
you have your way within me
but i do not feel alive
i let you touch the scars
i let you stroke my skin
but you cannot heal my pain
not even from within

today razor blades are not enough
there's a pain I need to feel
looking into your eyes right now
i know this fantasy isn't real
bring on knives and rusty nails
all those places you can't see
i'll take the pain and grief
everywhere you'll never be
so make believe tonight
just pretend you kind of care
your arms never did it for me
but I still left myself so bare
i let you touch the scars
i let you kiss my skin
but there's nothing left to hold me
just the darkness that i am
©2008-2009 ~brokenlolita
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Author's Comments

I think I'm slowly becoming the person I once was. It's the only time I felt strong and in control.

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:iconcaptan-crunch:
...this is really good. i have an extreme love hate relationship with your writing because i love it so much but i always but i always want to cry afterwards. i love your emotion. im just sorry you feel this way.

--
“Don't spend time beating on a wall,
Hoping to transform it into a door.”
-Coco Chanel

life's like an hourglass glued to the table...!

:heart:


real eyes realize real lies!!!!

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:iconbrokenlolita:
oh I'm sorry ... but I'm glad you do like it ^__^
Yeah well its passing. I'm realizing this girl might not be worth it. She is too... confused by her own emotions I think. I know the feeling but if she won't talk about it, I won't push.

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"If your wings have been broken and you can no longer move...come to me to find your peace, nestled here against my chest...I will welcome your to this place where flowers forever bloom...and will grant to you a dream from which you will not awake"
:iconcaptan-crunch:
dont be poetry is nt good unless it brings out emotion....to me at least.
and its good your getting over her its probably better that way

--
“Don't spend time beating on a wall,
Hoping to transform it into a door.”
-Coco Chanel

life's like an hourglass glued to the table...!

:heart:


real eyes realize real lies!!!!

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